Friday, March 20, 2009

HER MySTERiOUS DEAtH

Her death was due to mysterious circumstances & I
was assigned to the case. I’m detective Jessica Sircleface, and I’ve been with the law over 10 years and I have solved almost every case. It was on a Friday the 13 at night, when this all happened to be exacted. Jackie was at her house with her boyfriend Marcos. They didn’t had a good relationship, he use to be really mean to her. Don’t know why she was still with him. Anyways they were at her house for a while and there was a party like a couple of house away from them she really wanted to go, but he didn’t like the people so he told her “If you go behind my back and or if you think of going over there I ma kill you”. He had told her that when he was living her house, he said he had to do something for his mom; well at least that’s what he said.

She had this mysteries phone call like 30 minutes
after her man left. They said “Hey I see you” she said “who is this?” the person was like “don’t worry about it, just know that I’m watching you” she was like “ I know is you Marcos stop playing games with me!” She taught it was him, she taught that he was just messing around with her, but was it really him or someone else? who knows. Later on they called her from the party saying to some over. She had to make up and excuse saying that she couldn’t go because she had to do something. They were trying to convince her to go, but she couldn’t even do that. She was to scared to go, what if her man did found out? 1 hour passed and her man hasn’t called her, so her best friend had gone to her house. She told her to go to the party with her. Jackie told her the truth that why she couldn’t go. Jasmine her best friend said “he isn’t going to do nothing, lets just go and have a good time. So she listen to her friend and went she just got ready and they left.

When she got there everything was ok. It was already
late, it was like at 2:00 am. She was having such a good time that she forgot about what Marcos had told her. So she told Jasmine she was living, Jasmine was like ok. As she was going home, something strange happened to her. She was walking and she felt like someone was around her, she kept on locking back, but no one was there. She heard a noise in the bushes, it was a cat stuck it a bush and scare. When Jackie was about to get it someone comes from behind her and starts biting her up. Then they started stabbing her. Next thing you know she was dead! That week a lot of her friends were calling her she never picked up. Her man was driving around and found her in the streets. He called the police right away. They all were investigating.

Jasmine came by to tell the police something. She said
she knew who did it, but is it really him or was it someone else? She had told us what had happened everything, but when we were looking for him he was gone. Our guess his the one that killed her. We had a lot of prove to. The calls he had made, and well the story Jasmine had told us. We went to his house to look for him to see if he was there. He was, but the problem was he was dead to. His death was easy because he had record himself saying he was the one that killed Jackie and that he is going to kill himself to. He said he didn’t want to get locked up for that so he rather kill himself, plus he said that supposedly he really loved her and cant live with out her, but that’s hard to believe!

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